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Chapter 33 is like listening to a droll AI narrating.  It just lacks something.  So I'm going to start up on a bit of MORE back story for the events of .eXe, the most prominent of which is the first interstellar spacebattle between the MC and the UPE.

Should be a neat little short story following protagonist Jacob, an Astrophysicist major who's very receptive to details, and Captain Roland Reynolds who is the captain of the Type Omega Class Interstellar Spaceship of the Mars Coalition on its way to Earth to negotiate, partially through coercion, a trading plan for Mars and Earth that both parties can agree upon since Mars is overpopulated and unable to support its massive population, and Earth has become under populated (compared to all that is on Earth) and has the UPE unable to support its self.

A CSP does appear, though not much is explained about it, though there will be a CSP Addendum alongside the short story for it.

The story isn't going to focus as much on the battle as I did in the book, specifically because this battle is one that happened very fast, a violent sudden brutal encounter for both sides.  Remember, there was so much blood shed in this battle that the drifting debris mixed with so many killed people literally had blood raining down on nearby colonies months later.

You'll also witness some technology that no longer exists as weapon technologies, especially for ships, was much more advanced then.  Remember, the First Interstellar Space Battle not only put both the MC and the UPE into economic ruin, but also lowered both sides Technology Tiers as entire technologies were lost and destroyed.

I'm debating adding a part in .eXe where Jon explores the abandoned wreckage of the Type Omega Class Spaceships from both the MC and the UPE, though I'm unsure how I'd add that into the plot line.

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Hi, I'm Chris. Not much to tell about myself. I love anime, reading, gaming and music. I like the more hard core music like Disturbed, Avenged seven fold that kind of stuff. I do a lot of gaming. I usually play LoL or WoW. If you ever want to add me on LoL my summoner name is Kaloth96. I also do a lit of raiding on WoW. My favorite anime is probably Code Geass. I also like Naruto, Bleach, Death note and other types. I'll try and keep updates on Deviant art. My friend is still writing eXe so don't worry! It will be up as soon as it can be. In the mean time, I let my friend come on from time to time to update everything.

Joey here, I figure I'll include something about myself as well. I'm an IT major minoring in Psychology (with some miscellanious Creative Writing and Graphic Art classes when my classes are filled), I've been writing books since my freshman year of high school and have been vaguely irresponsible since I was born hence I have a pregnant girlfriend at age 20. I live in Arizona and am a closet Manga and Anime lover, but my main squeeze is video games.
So my life is very busy, from working to pay rent, to catering to my girlfriend to school work to working on my books and ideas.
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